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  1. fabschery on Chapter 1 Tue 30 Jan 2024 03:33AM UTC

    Hi !!!! It’s me again. Thanks for sharing this story. Time related fic (time loop, time travel, alternate timeline) are always been a favourite genre of mine. Even in movies. Thanks for all the fic you are writing in this category.

    I really like the premises of this story and cannot wait to see how their relationship will develop.

    “MY WHAT?! Nuh-uh, bruh,” Beca retorts with laughter, “sweetie, I-I’m not… I mean, if I were, like, I wouldn’t exactly kick you off the bed, but…” 😂😂🙌🏼

    Last Edited Tue 30 Jan 2024 03:35AM UTC

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    1. chiQuelle95 on Chapter 1 Tue 30 Jan 2024 03:40PM UTC

      Thanks. The next chapter will be slightly longer since it'll wrap up the whole plot. I'm still drafting it out. 🙈

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      1. fabschery on Chapter 1 Tue 30 Jan 2024 06:48PM UTC

        I really really don't mind long chapter. Take your time. I'll be there to read the end to this beautiful story whenever you're ready.

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