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  1. comsortegoya on Chapter 1 Fri 16 Feb 2024 07:21PM UTC

    saw the summary for this story and immediatly started vibrating in excitement. yesss, daniil's stepmom era content.
    my favorite bits:

    Fondness was dangerous, but the weight of an arm wrapped around him was delicious [...]

    love this sentence. it really gets the push and pull of an attraction or affinity (not even necessarily romantic ones). what if it blows up on my face? What if it doesn't? either way, you ache for the moments.

    “ABA CAN’T GO BECAUSE DA- THE BACHELOR IS SICK!”

    even before daniil had remarked it, i immediatly thought of how "da-" could both be daniil or dad. this was soooo smart. started jumping around when it happened.
    +
    loved the internal conflit of daniil not knowing his place within the house. oh daniil...we're really in it now...

    great stuff! really excited for reading the next chapters.

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    1. Plaguedboar on Chapter 1 Fri 16 Feb 2024 07:50PM UTC

      "Daniil's stepmom era" 🤣🤣🤣

      Oh I loved that LOL

      It's always really exciting to hear which passages stuck out to people, so thank you for letting me know! Yeah, at that point with Daniil being conflicted withthe push and pull of a relationship, I imagined that they might be interested but not yet fully romantic. Just... VERY comfortable with each other haha- I'm glad you picked that up!

      What I wanted was to scratch an itch that I personally felt for more Dadniil Dadkovsky content. I hope that it scratches that for you and that the next chapters are to your liking haha 😉

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