Comment on Across the Pond

  1. PaulSRChisholm on Chapter 1 Sun 10 Mar 2024 06:24PM UTC

    "Thanks for all your comments": Very much my pleasure!

    "Okay, I did wonder if non-Brits would understand the age reference": Probably not. Certainly I didn't. If you ever go back and make changes, please consider throwing in "five-year-old" somewhere early in the first chapter.

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    1. Bibliophile4ever on Chapter 1 Sun 10 Mar 2024 10:05PM UTC

      I'll definitely look at putting a more explicit age reference in earlier.

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