I'm happy to know that this story struck a chord with you. I really loved the one that I rewrote with Wednesday's twist (it was far more fleshed out than the original). I did debate leaving it alone, but the excuse to write a story with layers and unreliable character narratives was very tempting. I LOVE stories with three-dimensional characters in unreliable narratives because the perspective of character is so personal to the character.
I'm glad to know that I've got Enid's tone right! Starting it off was pretty hard because originally, I was going to have other scenes in the first chapter -- there's a scene I had dabbled with where Enid sees how Wednesday interacts with Pugsley (and Pubert) and realizes that Wednesday knows how to love but not romantically (or platonically), but it became hard to plug in and broke the flow a little so I nuked it after the first few paragraphs. Then I realized that there was absolutely no way I was going to write this story comprehensively in one shot like Wednesday's without feeling totally rushed so we're going to see in sections.
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itsJ_YOU_ke on Chapter 2 Sun 17 Mar 2024 06:19AM UTC
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