I so much enjoy seeing how you wrote Snape. I had a few laughs at how he responds to Harry's lack of eloquence. and still, Harry almost having tasted what awaits him, poor Harry, I believe he will try this position more often. My heart melted a little at Snape being understanding and patting Harry on the back, so lovely, and Hagrid being a great host is adorable. I'm very excited to read the next chapters too
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm delighted to know that you like my portrayal of Snape and had a few laughs while reading. Hagrid was fun to write! Admittedly, I wasn't entirely satisfied with how I wrote the opening to this story, but I believe it has evolved into a more solid narrative in the later chapters. Snape's growth in comforting Harry improves significantly in the more recent updates, fostering deeper understanding between them as the fic unfolds. Thank you again for your feedback, I hope you continue to find enjoy the story!
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