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  1. dawg dude (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 08 Apr 2024 04:03PM UTC

    wow. ive missed this melancholic kind of sampard, these two are so miserable

    amazing stuff op!! love how you captured gepards awkwardness, curt mannerisms, and missing social cues all in one. and yet hes so earnest in everything he does and thats why hes just the sweetest

    inexperience with intimacy mixed with pinches of lowkey sexual trauma via past lovers and uve got the craziest brew of misery. and the dig at the self esteem for being unable to properly satisfy your bedpartners like damn!

    very heartwarming that sampo decided not to steal from geppie in the end but also still very heartbreaking cuz that was maybe why sampo was only really interested in the first place

    enjoying this fic so far, i hope they can be happy together one day. also cool sparkle feature and funny rickroll names

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    1. dezzert on Chapter 1 Mon 08 Apr 2024 05:44PM UTC

      I wish I could kudos comments. Your comment was wonderful to read. I especially appreciate you taking note of Gepard's characterization because that was definitely the hardest part of writing this chapter lol. Making him awkward and endearing but not dumb and infantilized was a tricky line to walk.

      Thanks so much for reading!! I'm sorry for the awkward reply, I definitely channeled my own energy when writing Gepard's dialogue :')

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      1. dawg dude (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 09 Apr 2024 07:03AM UTC

        aw hell yeah cheers to being awkward as hell

        as a gepard liker between the two this was such a great read, i dont usually leave comments but this fic left such a crazy taste in my mouth that i couldnt stop thinking about it. thank you for all that you do op!!

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