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  1. LibraryForest on Chapter 1 Wed 24 Apr 2024 12:22PM UTC

    Having both Daisy and Sam’s perspective worked extremely well.

    Daisy stealing multiple things from Carter was wonderful.

    Daisy throwing the knife at Bra’tac followed by him saying he liked this human and asking her name and returning the knife was a nice inclusion.

    Sam’s complete confusion at Daisy was well done.

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    1. Stealing_Fire_67 on Chapter 1 Wed 24 Apr 2024 04:31PM UTC

      Prometheus stealing fire

      Daisy, Sam and Jack are the main protagonists for this fic, so... it's mainly Daisy POV, then Sam's and Jack's are usually tied, with other supporting character POVs added when I think that it's necessary. Plus, I kinda wanted the first meeting b/w Daisy and Sam to be... theirs, y'know?

      From canon, we know that Daisy can pickpocket. She's good at it. Especially since she grew up on the streets and she has instincts that were trained into her by May, so yes, Daisy could steal all of that. In defense of Sam, she was a bit busy with the towers and thinking about the scenario to actually focus on Daisy and what she was doing.

      I intend to have most of what Daisy does from now on to be instinctual. So... seeing an person in enemy colors come towards you, looking like they're sneaking behind the others is definitely a disable-first-then-question strategy. Also, that scene allowed me to introduce Bra'tac early on... and let him have a good impression of Daisy. That pays off in the future.

      Sam's confusion doesn't end there. It continues all throughout the fic.

      Thank you for reading and commenting!

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