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  1. Iquorvinc on Chapter 5 Tue 21 May 2024 08:00AM UTC

    You completed it! Sorta. Woohoo!

    Great concept and a great execution. My biggest complaint is only that you ended on such a cliffhanger when I need MORE

    Double time traveler mdhm is so good and this is such a good set up for it.

    If you don't mind my asking, how many loops is this second homura on and do you see a happy ending for the two or is it going to be tragedy?

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    1. Darkbeetlebot on Chapter 5 Tue 21 May 2024 03:56PM UTC

      This Homura is the same one that saw Dark Madoka make her contract at the start of the fic, so she's basically been through about as many loops as Homura Prime, minus a few. As for their ending...

      Well, it's intentionally left up to your imagination. :)

      Seriously though, I invite anyone who wants to, to continue this story and make whatever they think the ending should be. Because it could go either very well or very bad.

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      1. Iquorvinc on Chapter 5 Tue 21 May 2024 04:58PM UTC

        Ahh so we have original coolmura, time traveler madoka, and the moemura who is starting her own loops because of time traveler madoka

        And coolmura just met up with time traveler madoka? So even if coolmura and timedoka match and reach a conclusion, there's still an unmatched homura out on her own journey at any point. And the whole cycle can theoretically loop, spawning a multitude of "third wheel" homuras. That's tragic

         

        Also I didn't say this before but I love how... cinematic this last chapter feels. Could really see it in my brain.

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        1. Darkbeetlebot on Chapter 5 Tue 21 May 2024 05:27PM UTC

          It's more like Coolmura replaces this timeline's moemura. But yes, the moemura from Loop 68 does, in fact, become another separate Homura. But your interpretation is more tragic, so let's go with that.

          And thanks, I had a very fun time visualizing it in my head before making it. Originally, I had written Madoka and Homura's sections in their respective colors, but AO3 doesn't have colored text formatting. The two "End"s in "End Never End" were Pink on the left and Purple on the right.

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          1. MarkSlayer on Chapter 5 Wed 22 May 2024 10:21AM UTC

            >Originally, I had written Madoka and Homura's sections in their respective colors, but AO3 doesn't have colored text formatting.

            AO3 can do coloring though.

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            1. Darkbeetlebot on Chapter 5 Wed 22 May 2024 03:06PM UTC

              I didn't see the option. Where is it?

              Edit: Never mind, figured it out.

              Last Edited Wed 22 May 2024 03:28PM UTC

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