hiii! thank you so much for the feedback! in this pic I do want to make Jace a bit more aggressive than in canon and more proactive because of how terrified he is of his dreams, it's more a defense mechanism to fall on his aggression (especially with Alicent and Otto) and you will probably be seeing that a bit more. and haha about the raven I honestly have nooo idea how time and travel works in this world and I have tried so hard to figure it out so I'm honestly just winging it when it comes to travel time. I wouldn't call him arrogant as of yet, but I did definitely make him more sure of himself because in the show he seemed a bit more tentative, and I haven't read the book so I'm unsure what his characterization is like in the books other than he was the picture perfect heir and prince of the realm. I will definitely take your notes into account, as chapter two is already written I will be publishing it soon, I hope it's more to your liking :)
Regarding his appearance I like how you described him as a very large guy despite his age. It is more accurate to the books than to the show. His father Harwin is supposed to be huge, way larger than in the show, so it makes sense that so is Jace.
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