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1. Thelulutruck on Chapter 1 Tue 30 Jul 2024 04:19AM UTC

   

   I liked full segments more than just sentences, but the line at the begging "he had smelled lavender before. The scent of wine was an old friend." Right before Zoro goes into his mantra was nice. Stand out moments; Zoro describing Nami's scent and Luffy's lack of scent. The introduction of the Baratie and Zoro's immediate distrust of sanji. The part on the Merry where the crew chooses their sleeping quarters and Zoro's satisfaction from his choice. Also really liked the scene between Luffy and Zoro on the roof of the Baratie.

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2. 1. ST_Osmanthus on Chapter 1 Thu 15 Aug 2024 02:21AM UTC

      

      I missed this comment the first time somehow! Thank you for reading and for the feedback!

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