Thanks you for reading!! I don't plan on writing a second part, but as far as Leo and Donnie making up... well, if Future Donnie had feelings for his Leo, then Present Donnie would too, right?
In the rough draft, there was a scene where Future Donnie explains all that to Leo (while riding him lol) and Leo doesn't really believe him. It was kind of a nice parallel to the first chapter where Future Donnie doubts Leo's feelings for him. I decided to cut that scene out because it felt like I was trying to do too much, you know? This story is about Future Donnie, and having an entire section dedicated to Present Donnie (even if he never actually showed up) made the story too dense, so it had to go. Sometimes you have to kill your darlings lol
All of that to say: yes, Present Leo and Present Donnie will make up and get together. Even if I don't write it haha
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