I have been so excited to read this, I jumped on the chapter as soon as I got home from work!
I really adore the game between them, the way they push and pull, they’re so fun! Also poor Oliver being self conscious about his belly when Felix is quite literally DROOLING over it and I get it, I would too! Soft tummies I love you forever ❤️
“it didn’t actually matter though did it. Felix liked Oliver way before any of the messaging shit happened, way before he’d seen his cock, before all the messaging and posturing.” This! I love this! The realization that he likes all versions of Oliver he has come to know, and the fact that he’s ready to make it work no matter what ( also it’s hilarious how much pride he takes at being The brattiest Brat™)
The entire sex scene is SO hot, and I love seeing how much and how long Oliver has wanted Felix. The alternate pov is wonderful too, because we can see Oliver being self conscious about his intensity while Felix is absolutely basking in it. The perfect mixture of longing, filth and love is fantastic. I adore the ending! “My little freak”!! Using a possessive and staking his claim on Oliver who was worried Felix wouldn’t want it past this one time while lavishing his attention on the part of him he doesn’t like!! Romance is alive and well! They quite literally match each other freak, they are perfect together. Thank you for this story, I had so much fun reading it! It was hot, funny and sweet at the same time, amazing!
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