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  1. storyclock on Chapter 14 Mon 30 Sep 2024 06:21AM UTC

    This has been one of my favorite chapters in the fic. The way that you showcased Phel n Lunes's relationship to this point has been alredy a delight to read (i love when in fics they're siblinghood takes some focus cuz its really bittersweet but interesting to explore). But how they talked in this chapter really nails down how much loyalty n care this siblings have for one another n how much they just wish for simple things, normalty n each others happiness but can't have it with out a cost. Uhhhhhggg my heartttt, kudos 😭😭😭

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    1. The_Muppet on Chapter 14 Wed 02 Oct 2024 01:06AM UTC

      Thank you! I really want to show how important they are to each other and how they support each other within their complicated lives and yeees it is so bittersweet and I love to write them so much hehe, thank you for your lovely comment!

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