Oh my God I love it. The characters, the setting and the plot are all great.
First of all, I like that you are concentrating on Neville. I feel like he is greatly underrepresented in a lot of fanfictions. And now a building relationship between him and Nico? Awesome. Then McGonagalls worries about Nico's health, I bet (and hope) she gets Nico to go to the magical hospital in Britain (idk what it is called) when he doesn't get better. And when she finds out that Dumbledore is doing nothing to help Nico on purpose, well I guess he dies a bit early in this time line.
The whole thing with Hermione and how she puts her nose into stuff that doesn't concern her, I hope that Nico one day snaps at her because of this, I know I would. I mean they are not even friends.
Then the demigods. Man I love it. How will they react when they find out that Nico is quite happy about where he currently is? Maybe a bit denial? Maybe they are happy for him? Time will tell.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Also I don't know if you know this fanfiction but I have a feeling you would enjoy it. The fanfiction in question is: Alexiares of Hogwarts by Dragonfiction445.
Omg thank you so much!! I do have plans for McGonagall to put her nose into Nico's health a bit more but no defined outcome in mind. I just love Neville so much as a character and I get sad when he isn't represented so I gave him so love myself 😁 I will check that one out as I'd never heard it before And long comments are totally loved, encouraged, and greatly appreciated! Have a great day💖💖
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