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  1. Spider (Guest) on Chapter 4 Mon 11 Nov 2024 04:52AM UTC

    This is actually the best fanfiction I’ve ever read, I read the first few chapters and then had to come back and find it again to see if the next one was out (thankfully it was) and I was NOT disappointed. This was such an incredible chapter in an incredible fanfic. Honestly I love how even though it has “sex” it’s not just the blatant boring porn, it talks about real issues and goes about sex in a way that talks about real connection and the actual feelings instead of a 4 paragraph porno that is just a random girl getting degraded by her “daddy” (I hate those.) anyways, your writing is incredible and I’m super happy with this new chapter, I feel like it’s realistic to the characters, and I love the dynamic between Frank and Hazel, it definitely feels authentic to the characters.

    Anyway if you don’t believe me about how incredible I think this is, I’ve been on Ao3 since I was 10 (not good I know) and this is honestly the first time I’ve ever commented on anything.

    Huge Percy Jackson fan, first time I haven’t been grossed out by seeing my comfort characters in porn situations where Annabeth is a completely different person and just your average porn star.

    Once again, thanks for an amazing piece of literature. You should really write a book 😅

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    1. Baye on Chapter 4 Sun 17 Nov 2024 05:17AM UTC

      oh my goodness what a kind compliment 😭 I don't even know what to say, but this means so much. thank you for taking the time to comment this!!! and yeah, I'm really invested in the emotional aspect of sex as it pertains to these pairings. I just write what I want to read - tender, romantic intimacy between people that love each other. I'm glad that you enjoy this kind of story too!

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      1. FireFoxExtension on Chapter 4 Sun 17 Nov 2024 07:49PM UTC

        Hi 😅 I’m glad you agree with me (this is the same person, just not on a guest account)

        But yeah I’m really excited for the next few chapters you write!

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