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  1. Unovan_Echo on Chapter 3 Mon 25 Nov 2024 07:12PM UTC

    Oh I fucking *adore* how you write Harry's wolf, Howler seems very neat, I like him! I wonder if Harry will talk to him? Also yeah I'm highly fucking concerned for this boy... I have a feeling he starved himself and that's why he fainted... Also interesting to hear Harry is similar to Snape in Sirius' eyes... Considering what Snape said I feel like that's the abuse trauma... I'm so fucking concerned ugh- GIVE THIS KID A HUG! I'm definitely wondering when Sirius and Remus will start noticing the red flags. I fucking adore this fic a ton so far and cannot wait for more~!

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    1. orphan_account on Chapter 3 Tue 26 Nov 2024 03:12PM UTC

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      Harry will be able to talk to Howler, a very common thing among wolves who want to get to know their other half.
      Snape is concerned.
      Sirius doesn't really have a general idea of how people are supposed to be treated aside from how the potters treated him, and I'm pretty sure his memories are fuzzy because f the dementors.
      Remus is currently wrapped in guilt so any red flags he'll think is his fault and try to overcompensate.

      Also note this chapter has another section im working on, in between school, work and problems im not sure when it'll be completed but I do know soon.

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      1. Unovan_Echo on Chapter 3 Tue 26 Nov 2024 03:34PM UTC

        Hell yeah, excited to see those interactions in the future!
        Snape definitely should be. Sirius... Yeah the fuzzy memories for sure ain't helping. Also huh that's 3 abused kids in the same house now, just 2 are adults now.
        Poor Remus... I really hope he and Harry can get close over time.

        Excited to see the rest of the chapter for sure!

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        1. orphan_account on Chapter 3 Sun 12 Jan 2025 02:38AM UTC

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          not entirely sure if edits get notified so I'm just going to reply to you know the chapter is completed

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          1. Unovan_Echo on Chapter 3 Mon 13 Jan 2025 04:35AM UTC

            They don't and yep I loved this chapter~! Loved seeing Remus/Moony's thoughts and yep Howler is cute and I really hope eventually that Harry will be able to relax around them all more... God I hate the Dursleys. I definitely cannot wait for more~!

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