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  1. demid on Chapter 1 Sun 12 Jan 2025 04:12AM UTC

    First thought: that’s how predicted both primes will share guardianships of Jane but still hilarious to read through. The judge must be TIRRRED getting constant attention from avengers and thought this ruling will give them a lesson LOL. The judge smiling in court is me last day at work heheha

    Thank you for the update and can’t wait for the next one

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    1. Writing_by_Moonlight on Chapter 1 Sun 12 Jan 2025 10:48AM UTC

      The contract they both stubbornly ignored is one of those secrets hanging around in plain sight. It was always going to come around and bite them in the butts. And maybe it will again in the near future...

      Pacing got a little wonky during the second half of GAMF. But I had this plan to have Thewlis get harassed by an increasingly weird and threatening cast of characters, who show up at more and more inappropriate times. Until he's had enough and blows up at them.

      Those poor Primes. When the judge gives you a menacing smile, you know you've fucked up. (jk they deserved all of this and more)

      <3 <3

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