Oh this was such a delicious take on the best Gochi era 🤌🤌🤌 Nailed the conflict and emotions completely and love the way you seamlessly switched Chichi’s energy from anger - to concern - to powerless to resist 🫶 Also great point about Gohan reminding her of Goku and therefore always being in danger like him, I only thought about the general deliquency annoying her so that was a great take! And mmmm mmmm mmm that smut was FAB. Loved this wand what a great gift for Robyn!
I’m glad the transition between emotions felt seamless; that was the goal and I always worry about making it seem natural. Who wouldn’t be powerless to resist that hunk of man!?
See, I thought the same for so long! But then I kept thinking, alright, clearly this is upsetting her and even though that bit was likely just to be comedic, what could be the real emotions behind it? I’m so happy it came across well.
STAWWWP I am blushing 🙈 delighted you enjoyed that part! Anything for Robyn! 💕
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