oh my god, you captured the feel and writing style of gsgw so well i felt like i was reading a side story!! or are you... the author...
i absolutely adored this, seriously. braun being this menacing entity that soleum isn't even allowed to see, only feel... and no part of him is human, there's no way soleum can delude himself into thinking so despite how in denial he is. everything was masterfully portrayed, i aaattteeee this up, i devoured every hint at soleum being contaminated, i was gnawing at my own arm, i feel like i have contracted rabies, mark me down as scared AND horny. and soleum coming out of it covered in blood? finger-licking good.
Gosh, thank u... This is actually my first ever first person pov prose 🫣 I've dabbled in narration but the style of the original webnovel really let me settle in the methodology like ohhh i understand. Little bite paragraphs...
OBJECTIVE ACHIEVED 👍 I love a good hair-raising horny vibe
it's really like, a sentence per paragraph lol. but it makes it super easy to read. easily digestible, even, despite everything that's going on ever. you made it your own too! it's amazing to see. i would EAT anything else you write for them (promise)
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