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  1. fallenryoichi on Chapter 3 Mon 03 Mar 2025 06:43AM UTC

    "A sudden cackle caused nearly every one to turn to its origin, Kratos among them, only to see Kara come hobbling from one of the nearby alleys, her brown robe soaked from the storm." (i hope the bold worked, first time trying)

    idk if this is a mistake or not; in the previous chapter, "a torrential rain began to pour down at this point, yet, to the surprise of all, not one of Kratos' people seemed to be getting wet". in my head, this is either just a mistake and you forgot that detail, or only the followers' bodies don't get wet, meaning their clothes still do. idk and it doesn't matter to me, just thought i'd point it out

    Last Edited Mon 03 Mar 2025 07:07AM UTC

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    1. MandoVet on Chapter 3 Mon 03 Mar 2025 03:55PM UTC

      Yeah, that was a mistake on my part. Good eye, catching that

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