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1. bewitchingbloom on Chapter 3 Tue 01 Apr 2025 08:10PM UTC

   

   Seelah and Anevia...my friends 🥺💕 You wrote them both PERFECTLY! Seelah's voice especially comes through so crisply. She and Raqim have such a fascinating dynamic already 👀

   >As Seelah watched, fuming silently but bracing the sticks as he instructed, he then unwound the tagelmust from his head and used it to wrap the splint firmly in place; and as he did, a thick, long mass of black hair spilled out down his shoulders. Against her will, Seelah found herself admiring the picture.<

   😏😏😏

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2. 1. Dujour_13 on Chapter 3 Wed 02 Apr 2025 06:12PM UTC

      

      Raqim's not making a very good first impression here, but I decided he does get a fabulous hair moment. The dynamic between him and Seelah will get more complicated but I guess this is a small win he can chalk up.

      It means so much to me that you enjoy Seelah and Anevia's voices. They're like such good old friends to both of us. Thank you 🥺💕💕💕

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