Comment on A Lack of Proper Decorum

  1. TheFemPC on Chapter 13 Wed 30 Apr 2025 07:25PM UTC

    lol you know as I was writing I thought "Yeah this is gonna be such a mean tease", even felt that way for me haha, but I wanted to reflect the sort of thing Cullen was feeling too(Ie So close, so goddamn close!)
    I am glad you enjoyed it though, even if Cullen blue-balled himself there at the end :P
    Don't worry, those two might be disciplined and in a semi-permanent state of denial but the time is coming close for them to have to confront it. To ease your suffering a bit, I can most assuredly say they can only hold out for a few more chapters before somethings got to be done. For the sake of the Inquisition of course *lies poorly in Cullenese*

    hey, at least Cullen got to fondle her chest a bit though, even if she was a bird at the time xD

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    1. Primosvemos on Chapter 13 Wed 30 Apr 2025 07:54PM UTC

      STFU HE DID

      WHAT.

      CULLEN STATON RUTHERFORD FUCKINHGGG YOU YOU YOU YOU YOU—

      So thats why Linny was pissed when she reformed back TOT- girl imagine you taking a nap in ur birdie form and ur super hot commander with obvious feelings for you starts oggling around ur udders- bitch the way I would yell— TOTTT—

      I-
      Like-
      His reaction when he finds out what he ACTUALLY did is gonna kill me LMFAOOOO

      I loved every single part of this chapter I cannot express- like- RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

      JUST LET THEM FORK

      PLEASEEGSNS— Im going to switch to cullenese rn “FOR THE SAKE OF THE INQUISITOR!!”

      AND do whatever u want!! Ok?! I can suffer it- ToT- BUT Linny has to step up- sis ur man is so light around you- the air finna blow him to seheron
      😭😭 AND I CANT WAIT AS ALWAYS!! >:3

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      1. TheFemPC on Chapter 13 Wed 30 Apr 2025 10:30PM UTC

        Lol Lin is just a grumpy creature in general when she shapeshifts, but to be fair she was more distracted by the big ass owl swooping at her(as Alistair used to say, "swooping is bad"!). And poor Cullen has yet to put two and two together about THAT part hehe, as if he needed to be any more awkward :P

        Ah LIn will step up soon enough., don't you worry. Course she might need a little push first but she'll get there. (I don't know why but as I was writing that I just pictured Cullen rolling up to her Clan's camp on a fancy horse shouting "Come on babe, its time for bible class!" as she leaps out of an Aravel and her father tries to chase him off with a big stick haha)

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        1. Primosvemos on Chapter 13 Thu 01 May 2025 02:35AM UTC

          I AM ABSOLUTELY DRAWING THIS LAST PART. OMG. PERFECT. (I need to see her dad poking him with a stivk and telling him to go away like hes chasing a racoon 😭)

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