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Xseraph8899 on Chapter 2 Mon 12 May 2025 08:54PM UTC

You make a very good point, she is a kid having her world turned upside down right now. I'm gonna fix it up, maybe not to a full panic attack (because I don't know how to write a panic attack properly), but she is gonna be less chill with it. Thanks for helping me improve my writing!

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1. Zym_Skybound on Chapter 2 Tue 13 May 2025 05:22AM UTC
  
  Yeah, don't worry about it, its mostly an opinion, not an order to do it that way, its better not to risk it much and have the opposite result
  
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