hands down THE best palia fic i have ever read thus far. the way you characterize everyone is so on point, it’s incredible. they are all extremely loveable. i'm not even particularly fond of reth (he’s probably my least talked to villager) but you make him SO endearing. his internal dialogue is so funny and the pacing of it all really PUTS you in his brain. i don’t wanna diss the writing in the game but i really struggled to connect with reth’s character through his quests. here, though? i am ROOTING for this boy. he is such a mess
+ as someone who decided to romance nai’o at first sight, you’ve written such a compelling side of him that i wish we’d see more of in-game. i love love love how you’ve portrayed his anger at reth while keeping what makes him HIM
chefs kiss (ba dum tss) all around, so excited to see where this goes!!!
ahh thank you so much! These characters are so vivid, characterization comes easy in that regard haha
thoughhh it was really hard finding that balance of usual Nai'o and angry Nai'o since he's, like, never upset at anything really. I'm glad you think I struck a nice medium there.
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