cracking knuckles. finally got time to sit down and write this. it's time to get to business. Beautiful exposition to the story. you totally fooled me even if you weren't meaning to. ← guy who was very much under the impression they were happily dating, but just that anaxa is overworking himself and hadn't noticed........ Because thats exactly what anaxa would do. but then we'd slowly grow out and find out the more anaxa thinks about it, the more he ponders the more we realize oh. this relationship hasn't been in that honeymoon state for a while. NOT VERY SURE IT WAS INTENTIONAL BUT i slowly started thinking "...wait. what happened??" right as anaxa thinks about when things started to change. when thunder hit and he got worried about khaslana? (👁️ hey.... is this something we shouldn't overlook. feels like something is hidden here) Masterful exposition truly
don't even get me started on the reveal later that something happened to khaslana before they dated. WHAT HAPPENED!!! anaxa we are curious too. you know you cou;d've but ou didn't want to push him and you were worried btu oruruhgurghghggh.... thats so anaxa. why why why why why why .
something really sweet is that even when anaxa is standing next to phainon, essentially khaslana when they first fell for each other.. he still worries over His khaslana. even if the "ideal" khaslana is right in front of him, he can't help but to really just worry over his boy, his boy who could've been like this. and it hurts so much because the words you convey just manage to hit in a way that screams "anaxa isn't missing the old khaslana only!!! he feels guilt when he sees phainon!!! that's why he's so conflicted!! he can't just fall in love with phainon since he's so torn up that this could be khaslana if he were to put more in a relationship!" and it just hurts SO so much. god anaxa we must save you boy
> ps. the little moments of anaxa thinking of how they fell in love .. the ways we saw khaslana took care of him in the beginning (at home) and how we saw anaxa try to take care of khaslana near the end with the office thing. the contrast is actually really nice now that i think abt it. i didn't notice it at all but it parallels so well.. beginning end home office irl okhema. Wow. Damn. You are really shakespear reborn wtfREGARDLESS
anaxa's naming scheme totally real i get it. love the little silly moments in the fic that make it really feel Real as a story. the little narratives and OHHH god please. the way you describe okhema in anaxa's eyes. his wonder but also his own work. ...and phainon's very own strange words. anaxa not pressing suspicions is kinda funny when you think about his guilt with not pushing khaslana more back then... heh. Well. Heh. lets just say. Thoguhts in my mind. especially with how phainon sacts. heh. I CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER please take care i love you and your writing i am so glad to see you here again please have an amazing day
sasei you continue to spoil me rotten and i'm always so, so grateful whenever you pop up ;-; you really make my day with these comments!! when i say that writers find inspo and want to write for their readers... you are definitely one of those readers i hope is happy with the stories i put out!! (if not, that's okay too haha!) but really, it feels like i'm winning a million dollars whenever you pop up. thank you so much for always leaving such a thoughtful response. it fuels my braincell even more!!
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