Comment on Calcination Syndrome

  1. LunaMiuna_l0vol on Chapter 9 Sun 13 Jul 2025 02:31AM UTC

    AAAAA THOSE TWO MAKE ME INSANEEE
    I don't even know how to properly fix this but wouldn't it be Nice if those two just mutually agreed on a coverup story for the whole kidnapping hostage thing they'd tell others and Sans gaining back full freedom so this can BECOME something actually good, cause they clearly love one another and aghgrrhrr, I just want to fix it cause they're so good and sweet together, but then there comes a moment like Sans missing Papyrus and it's a reminder of the reality of the situation, and Ow, Pain! :( Like can't they just make up, work out this whole thing together, and make it less awful? Like imagine Sans in the epilogue half joking like: "Hey, remember that time when you kidnapped me and held me hostage for several weeks? Was that fucked up or what?" That would be really great and funny, like I'm imagining Sans jokily and seemingly light-heartedly mentioning it here and there when they're in private as a way to cope with humor and to get back at Grillby for all that time, and Grillby being all ashamed and remorseful about it, which, deserved, and then the conversation moving to something genuinely light-hearted and wholesome, like wouldn't that be nice? A relationship like that, with Sans enjoying not being trapped anymore and Grillby enjoying seeing Sans truly free and happy? Cause like sure it definitely started super fucked up and bad, but is it delusional of me to think that this can be turned into something genuinely good? Though now that makes me wonder, if something like that happened, would Sans be able to keep the secret from Papyrus for long? And if not, would he accept Sans's explanations and allow for the relationship to continue somehow, after making sure Grillby isn't mistreating Sans in any way anymore of course?

    Also I want you to know that if you're planning to take the story in that kinda direction, this isn't me being impatient and wanting that to happen as soon as possible, we both know how for that to ever happen they need time and doing it prematurely wouldn't make sense for the story, so I'll enjoy whatever you throw at me while looking forward to how things play out, hehe.

     

    And btw, this:
    "He couldn't stop the shiver down his spine with a short sigh of relief, relaxing into him. Until he realized Grillby's thumb was gently stroking his stomach just above his navel.

    Grillby was awake" -BRO I FELT HIS PANIC THERE. I would die I think /j
    I also really enjoyed reading his conflicting thoughts and desires over whether he wanted control, or wanted for it to be taken from him, bro is sadomasochistic through and through. Both of them are. Also I am an Aroace reading this, and usually I would just be entertained by the smut stuff while not being affected by it too much myself, but with this you've occasionally struck the fucked up stuff I'm actually into, like the idea and scenario of something fucked up like that being done to me, like it's just the whole, wrongness and fucked up-ness of it all that I can't resist, the idea of control being "forcefully" taken from me so I can just focus on the roleplay scenario and the delicious fear and dread and desperation and hopelessness and despair mixed with overwhelming pleasure and a sense of twisted sweetness and gentleness to it, it's just so aghrgr-r, yanno?

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    1. Fells_Kitten (SquirrleyCow) on Chapter 9 Sun 13 Jul 2025 05:30AM UTC

      👀👀👀 this makes me wish AO3 had a direct messaging option because dude... i don't want to give anything away so i won't comment on the first half of that just know i am HYPED to keep going with this story. (also no you don't sound impatient at all! :D )

       

      first off, holy hell i loved everything about this comment and you got me kicking my feet and freaking at your excitement!!! and funny enough, i'm demi and i got into writing smutty fanfiction because i couldn't find the kind of story i wanted to read because i need to get invested in characters for it to be engaging when it comes to romance and relationships otherwise i just lose interest. and also YES i have craved this kind of emotionally complicated fucked-up-ness in a story and i've been sitting on this idea for two years because i needed it to make sense in my head for the way i see UnderFell Sans and Grillby and just ARRGH! 😖 processing it all through the thoughts and emotions of both captor and hostage is just so much fun and i am just rabid for the whole story 😅🤣😭 i've got stories with nice, healthy, *normal* and supportive relationships and i now i need the insanity of something like this.

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      1. LunaMiuna_l0vol on Chapter 9 Sun 13 Jul 2025 03:28PM UTC

        Okay ao3 finally is working again, yea I wanted to say that you can message me on Tumblr, I'm @lunamiuna-the-curious-fella and I already found you on there, followed you, and sent you an ask since DMs weren't working. You can talk to me there about my first half of the comment without giving away too much to the rest of the world. Also, by the way you worded your reply to it tells me that I may or may not have been spot on or close to what you're actually planning, hehe :>

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