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1. Csquared08 on Chapter 3 Thu 24 Jul 2025 02:18AM UTC

   

   Zoey just jamming in a wooden closet as she tries to not breakdown is such a strong mental image

   Man do her sisters keep coming in clutch. It's so dang heartwarming

   I also love the attention to detail in the text chain, from Zoey's names for Rumi and Mira to her correcting her typos. That attention to detail has been present throughout, and it's really helped the characters feel genuine.

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2. 1. writinstuffthathopefullydoesntsuck on Chapter 3 Sun 03 Aug 2025 04:25PM UTC

      

      Thank you so much! <3 I definitely had fun developing the text chain lol.

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