Your writing is super good and so is the story you’re creating, but the smut is very underwhelming. There’s a good build-up for it but it’s not exactly executed in the same manner. Is there a reason for this or?
Lol yes and no, I was aiming for a slower burn but their first time having actual sex wasn’t meant to be overly satisfying since it was a calculated move on Will’s part and not necessarily him giving into his yearning for Hannibal. At this point he’s still using sex as a weapon/manipulation to shift his power dynamic with Hannibal. That being said I wasn’t necessarily aiming for ‘very underwhelming,’ so hopefully the future sex scenes are up to your standards lmao
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