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  1. HeruKane on Chapter 5 Sun 10 Aug 2025 05:12PM UTC

    Oooh interesting. And fun. And enjoyable. Great chapter!

    So unicorns, Slytherins, growing unity, and nasty professors, what a great chapter. I will take the last, its funny I was assuming Snape, but you made it a theory professor, how very interesting. I like how the other professors are responsible and capable, so having one that needs to be shown how wrong he is is fun. Also Harry is a Ravenclaw, so I hope he finds a way to destroy the professor without actually loosing points. That said, I could also see gong to Flitwick about this, it seems like a thing Flitwick would help on.

    On Slytherins, interesting dynamics there, and also I like the nature of the feud being a magic oath thing. I also like the opening that Harry might use to become friendly with Nott. The Draco situation is cool.

    But. But...

    OMG I LOVE BLAISE!!!!!!!! Seriously Harry and Blaise, sooo good. Look, I get it, they are 11. BUT, OMG Blaise is so cool. He is a scene stealer in the best of ways. Like seriously, I want Harry and Blaise to become good friends cause OMG that interaction is brilliant and I was grinning the whole time. Soooo good.

    Them talking to Hagrid and seeing the unicorns is interesting, and I like what you are doing with this Hermione - surprisingly enough. But I think it helps that nobody is actually pushing to direct Harry, he is his own being.

    But yeah, OMG, Blaise. So good! Seriously so good.

    As I said, great chapter! Looking forward to more, still said its two weeks not once a week. But yeah, good chapter.

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    1. Casual64 on Chapter 5 Tue 12 Aug 2025 10:36AM UTC

      Blaise is a lot of fun to write, despite my own limited familiarity with Italian swear words and exclamations :)

      And who knows, perhaps Harry might indeed one day become friends with Nott...but Susan is probably gonna have a thing or three to say about that xD

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