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  1. Doku_Okami_Lord_of_Laser_Spiders on Chapter 5 Mon 01 Sep 2025 09:21PM UTC

    Aww, thank you so much! 😁 I wasn’t very confident in my ability to write him how he is in canon (still not confident about that in regards to him and some other characters), so I decided to do a combination of canon Melon and a more relaxed and healthy version (read: relatively stable) for this fanfic. He’s definitely an awesome character, very adorable, *very* attractive looks-wise. I’d love to hear more of your thoughts throughout! 😁

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    1. ijustwannadrawforfun on Chapter 5 Wed 03 Sep 2025 04:47PM UTC

      I like his dialog, it just feel so Melon, like something he would say and how he tricked Amvrosiy into letting his guard down while also setting out potential "traps" for him to walk into while keeping it entertaining for himself in the process. 🤩🤩 I love "relatively stable" Melon, it's funny how you mentioned that, in my AU Fanfics he is actually redeemed and could be called the same thing. 😁 But anyway, LOVEEE how you introduced him, his exit scene and I an excited to see more of him!! 🤩 🤩 🤩 🤩 🤩

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      1. Doku_Okami_Lord_of_Laser_Spiders on Chapter 5 Wed 03 Sep 2025 07:19PM UTC

        Melon will definitely be appearing more, so you’ll get your wish! I have some Melon-cious scenes (Melon + delicious, because he’s a snacc) planned out.

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        1. ijustwannadrawforfun on Chapter 5 Wed 03 Sep 2025 07:35PM UTC

          I am excited to see more of him! I love when people write him this well! 🤩🤩

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