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  1. shleyis22 on Chapter 2 Fri 12 Sep 2025 01:40PM UTC

    I think there's some missing parts here, author (^-^)/
    The first paragraph just doesn't make sense, when you read it
    Like there's a word or a section missing
    And the second paragraph looks like there's a missing word

    After that came the Statement of Romana Raegan about the strange man across the road, who after a short inspection on the news around the time the Statement was taken and an email to Sasha to get some street camera footage but Jon chalks it to as a stalker and anxiety.

    Then, Hera Irvine who was under severe bullying in the workplace; She was mildly if not incredibly superstitious- having believed in vengeful spirits, who [are/were] out to get her. The last two were most obviously written by two people in touch– They were written in the same week, about the same story, in the same perspective.

    This story is great tho! :)
    I can't wait for the Big Reveal™ :D

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    1. shark_kai on Chapter 2 Fri 12 Sep 2025 04:16PM UTC

      Thanks for pointing that out! No beta we die like men really kicking in lol, I'm so glad you enjoy it! I'm real busy so you'll get quite a short chapter now lol

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      1. shleyis22 on Chapter 2 Fri 12 Sep 2025 04:36PM UTC

        (^v^)

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