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  1. Tbear (Guest) on Chapter 8 Fri 26 Sep 2025 02:18PM UTC

    These last updates were done masterfully. I love the introduction of the Quillette mythology. I love the way you are building Bella up to be a badass. The amount of autonomy that she has in her relationships is so encouraging.

    I totally feel like a training montage is coming soon for both Swans. Lol.

    Thanks again for the update.

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    1. noahsarcanine on Chapter 8 Fri 26 Sep 2025 03:03PM UTC

      Thank you! We really wanted to expand on a new type of lore and worldbuilding. We took a lot of this chapter directly from the books with a few changes, making it so it wasn’t a closed practice meeting that they were attending. We also really wanted Bella to have the autonomy she never had with Edward, and I’m glad it’s coming across!

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