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  1. zestyScud on Chapter 11 Fri 14 Nov 2025 02:01AM UTC

    Adonys is just that good, of course! It's not endangering mission success if you know you can pull it off lol

    Also the name is *chef's kiss* Yes of course KO is going undercover as "Adonis", he has a healthy self-esteem.

    I'm glad you have survived the wildfires!! You seriously did capture that tension/waiting followed by the rush super well in your writing. It seems like a very stressful event, and I'm sorry that you had to go through that multiple times.

    they, and everything they're leaving behind, will never be the same again no matter what happens.

    Going to be thinking about that for a while now...

    Jazz was doing A++ O.K., and that's how you knew he could easily survive that building! Shrugged it right off no problem at all! (Poor Prowl going "He's saying what???")

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