Comment on Auras Part 3

  1. Ani272 on Chapter 31 Fri 10 Dec 2021 07:32AM UTC

    I've run your comments through a translator as I don't speak French... although I'm quite chuffed that I actually got the gist of most of this simply from finding words that looked a bit like their English counterparts! And Wow! Thank you for your kind appraisal of my writing. I'm so glad you enjoy my style and find it easy and engaging to read 😊

    With John & Evan... I completely agree, and they will eventually get there, I promise. But for right now, they're both military and bound by rules and regs that say they can't love each other, and they're both very good at hiding what they feel. And of course they're at liberty to express themselves where Adi is concerned, and so they do. This story - Part 3 - for all that it's 200,000 words long, actually only covers 4 weeks in the life of Atlantis! Hard to believe, but very true. So much happened in that month! Part 3 started on Day 154, five days after the Daedalus headed back to Earth, and finished up on Day 185. (Finding Adi was Day 1). This is how I keep track of what's happening when, and all the things that randomly pop up in chapters when I'm not expecting them to! But all day today, John & Evan scenes have been running through my mind, so I think Part 4 will definitely see a lot of progress there... but maybe not as far as you're hoping, because they are still both in the military. I know that most of my other stories see them disregarding regs, but I'm not so sure that my Auras universe will allow for that. But don't worry... I have plans for how to resolve this, in time.

    Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment, and I'm so very glad that you enjoy my stories. It's really nice to write for an appreciative audience 😊

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    1. Lilie_lect (Guest) on Chapter 31 Fri 10 Dec 2021 11:04AM UTC

      I apologize for my previous comment in French. With the useful google translator for this website, I read your story directly in my native language to make the most of your story that I forgot that the original one was not French :)!! I will do it in English this time!

      Wow, I didn't realize that it was only 4 weeks!! We are so caught up in the story and their feelings that time seems go by faster.

      I really want to thank you for your reply and your comment on the relationship between John&Evan.
      I fully understand your point of view on their military constraint which is reflected very well in your story. I agree that it would be a shame to go too fast in their interactions. I have to admit that my favorite thing about their relationship is precisely that they can't say/show their feelings for each other. This makes their interactions all more intense. I love the start of chapter 1 when they get the garden for Adi and John takes the opportunity to whatch him and how he remembers it later. Or in chapter 19 when John walks into Evan's room when he's just getting out the shower and John can't help but watching. I really appreciate your ability to show us these emotions in such intense way in just a few words. I fully love how you deal with these two characters. Even in your other stories like "it started with an Ancient device..." (I love so much this story! This is my favorite with Auras). You communicate their feelings to us so easily in depite of their contraint. I really appreciate that.

      I trust you completely for the rest of the story. I can't wait to know the rest. How things are going between John&Evan and Adi of course :)

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    2. Lilie_lect (Guest) on Chapter 31 Fri 10 Dec 2021 11:21AM UTC

      I apologize for my previous comment in French. With the useful google translator for this website, I read your story directly in my native language to make the most of your story that I forgot that the original one was not French :)!! I will do it in English this time!

      Wow, I didn't realize that it was only 4 weeks!! We are so caught up in the story and their feelings that time seems go by faster.

      I really want to thank you for your reply and your comment on the relationship between John&Evan.
      I fully understand your point of view on their military constraint which is reflected very well in your story. I agree that it would be a shame to go too fast in their interactions. I have to admit that my favorite thing about their relationship is precisely that they can't say/show their feelings for each other. This makes their interactions all more intense. I love the start of chapter 1 when they get the garden for Adi and John takes the opportunity to whatch him and how he remembers it later. Or in chapter 19 when John walks into Evan's room when he's just getting out the shower and John can't help but watching. I really appreciate your ability to show us these emotions in such intense way in just a few words.
      I fully love how you deal with these two characters. Even in your other stories like "it started with an Ancient device..." (I love so much this story! This is my favorite with Auras). You communicate their feelings to us so easily. I really appreciate that.

      I trust you completely for the rest of the story. I can't wait to know the rest. How things are going between John&Evan and Adi of course :)

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      1. Ani272 on Chapter 31 Sat 11 Dec 2021 11:51AM UTC

        Oh! "It started with an Ancient device..." is one of my favourites too! I'm so glad you like that one.

        I'm looking forward to writing John and Evan's continuing story... they wouldn't ever have acted on their attraction of course, but with Adi in the mix, it will surely work out for them all 😊

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