Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202305:26AM UTC
Ironic how a witch hunter from the 1600's was able to make a stable portal between the two words when The Doctor was saved from being stranded in a parallel universe by one little power cell in his Tardis.
Very ironic indeed, and this just hit me, if Luz takes her fob watch with her the Boiling Isles, and she opens it sometime in season 2, she’ll definitely be able to recreate a stable portal due to the increased intelligence from being a Time Lord/Lady.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202306:05AM UTC
True though I thought that Luz and Camila were going to open their fob watches after the events of the 3rd special plus the 10th never took his watch anywhere cause of the perception filter on it so how would Luz by pass that.
Would Camila have told Luz to take the watch with her or had put it in Luz's bag.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202302:38PM UTC
Well then that solves the problem of her not taking it do to the perception filter on it which side not I always thought that the concept of a perception filter to be a cool way to be invisible without really being invisible if a remember right there was a Alpha with a similar ability in the Scifi series Alpha's.
Also question if Luz awakens to being a Time lady before season 3 than what would that mean for her glyph combos cause I always thought it was a bit of a let down that Luz uncovered those glyph combos in Philip's diary and never used them I mean I can see her not making use of the pettrification glyph combo given it's lethality it's best to only use that as a last resort and even then probably only on abominton's but what's the reason for her not using the wind glyph combo?
I’ll make sure to have her use more glyph combos, and maybe some new ones of her own.
Also, here’s what I have planned for her Sonic Screwdriver design so far:
A fusion between a fountain pen like you said, along with the 9th/10th Doctor’s Sonic Screwdriver, except the light on it is purple, and the pen tip has a cap that looks like the black end tip of that version of the Doctor’s Screwdriver. With, a hologram function like you recommended, primary colors of this Screwdriver are black, silver, and purple.
Also question, if she were to use the hologram function to draw a glyph in the air, could the glyph still be activated? Or does it have to be drawn on a physical object?
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202303:30PM UTC
That's a very good question I don't think the glyphs and glyph combos need to be drawn on anything to be used though I think for the plant glyph Luz when using a holographic drawing of the glyph would have to visualize the surface she wants to summon the plant's from do to the surface of the glyph then being intangible. As we've never seen plants being summoned without a surprise for them to grow from to start with such as the ground or Luz's paper.
If you'll pardon my tangent here Luz's plant glyphs seem to work off a mix of 2 other magical methods combined that being conjuration/projection and enhancement Luz conjures the plant while directing it's still conjuring form to be enhanced to direct it's developed and give herself some control over it. The reason for the need to visualize the surface show intends to summon the plant's from but not do so with the other available glyphs and glyph combos is because the plant glyph is the only one that manifests a physically long lasting material whereas the others either manipulate the energy and natural elements in the air to create the glyphs desired effects.
I think “GATE: Thus the JSDF Fought There”, mainly because of the inter dimensional travel, he might not like the conflict though. But I have a feeling he would like Digimon Adventures 1 & 2.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202304:22PM UTC
Oh yeah I could see that personally I think the Fate universe minus the whole moon cell crap would definitely be intriguing to The Doctor especially considering that the Fate verse doesn't limit itself to any one type of cultural magic anything goes similar to the magic in A certain magical index.
The various different clash of ideals in Fate/zero would definitely have The Doctor at odds with multiple masters and servants which ironically The Doctor has in previous incarnations held various similar positions ideal wise.
I’m gearing up to write the next chapter “The Reawakening”, but I need help deciding which point in season 2 Luz should open the fob watch. And how she’ll handle the situation. Or maybe I should reconsider my plans and have her open it in Season 3. Now that I think about it, season three makes more sense.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202304:48PM UTC
Yeah this is kinda why I was thinking that u were originally going to have Luz open the fob watch in season 3 as quite a lot of stuff would need to be rearranged and rewritten in terms of how various episodes played out depending on when Luz were to have opened the watch in season 2. Personally I vote u go with the season 3 route though if you still want to go with Luz opening it in season 2 I think it would have to be opened after the events of Yesterday's lie like perhaps something kicked in from Camila's memory as a Time lady and the last thing she tells Luz is to open up the fob watch cause she instinctively knows that Luz stands a better chance of surviving and building a better portal home if she were to reawaken as a Time lady especially considering that even without being a Time lady Luz was able to make a semi stable portal.
That can work, I can start off the chapter with the ending of Yesterday’s Lie, as Luz is going back through the unstable portal, Camila can tell her to open the watch. Although the season 3 route is also good, and it would let Camila explain the whole situation to Luz.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202304:59PM UTC
Yeah which ever route you choose at least you'll have additional material for 2.0 version of this fic using whichever route u didn't choose this time around.
The question is how will Reaching out and Elsewhere and anywhere be handled?
Regarding Luz’s story about her dad? The whole thing with he died in an accident was part of the false identity of Camila Noceda that the Nurse adopted, Luz’s dad died in the Time War, he died defending his home and his family, I don’t know how Luz will handle that information, but with her reawakening Luz would definitely have an identity crisis so she’ll need all the support of her friends, family, and girlfriend that she can get. Also would it make sense for Luz to have nightmares about the Daleks before or after her reawakening?
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202305:23PM UTC
Yeah personally it make sense for her to have incredibly vague memories of the Daleks after she awakens in fact that could be what Luz is more hung up on during Reaching out hell I imagine a similar mourning scene from the episode but with the coffee table littered with various sketches of the Daleks and Galifray.
Yeah, yeah that works. As for Elsewhere and Elsewhen, with Luz having been reawakened she will have a much better understanding of time travel.
Of course once she reawakens she won’t have any drastic personality changes, she’ll still be the same Luz we’ve all come to know and love, but now she’ll have vast knowledge of a lot of things.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202305:39PM UTC
Besides being able to innately understand the machanics of time travel and having near perfect total recall, photographic memory and being able to do some Stephen Hawking's level of mathematical physics I think something a Time lord/lady has intelligence wise that separates them from other sentient beings is that they have the ability that Syler has from Heroes to be able to know how something works Quantum adaptation I think it's called it would make sense as to how Luz would know so much.
Also I do think that Luz's personality would definitely remain largely the same however I think she would probably think things through a bit more often than in cannon.
Yeah, she would think things through more before rushing into a situation, and wait, the tale of the Wittebane brothers is well known in Gravesfield right? So wouldn’t Luz know right off the bat that Philip is a Witch Hunter following her reawakening? Because of the photographic memory.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202305:54PM UTC
Yeah I imagine it would kinda be like one of those moments from the movie Limitless where she would perfectly recall that moment in history class when she was only half listening.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202306:04PM UTC
Oh I think it would be far better for it to be a gift from The Doctor especially after a reawakened Camila has told Luz so much about the legendary Time lord known by the Daleks as The oncoming storm.
Yes! That works beautifully! But…How would Camila/The Nurse feel, when she learns about how the Doctor used the Moment? How would Luz feel when she learns about that?
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202306:20PM UTC
Hostley part of me thinks that The Doctor would hide that truth from her as it's something that we know he's ashamed of doing.
As for how Luz would feel that's tricky The Doctor told his daughter Jenny that being a Time lord/lady is far more than just having two hearts it's about a shared history, a shared pain and a shared suffering though I'm pretty sure he was meaning metaphorically. Anyways I think Luz would feel both detatached from her culture yet still incredibly saddened by the loss of not being able to personally experience it for herself as one of Luz's best aspects of which she shares with The Doctor is her eminence empathy.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202306:49PM UTC
I mean I know I would at least if I'm unarmed she probably would.
Also I wonder what Luz would be able to do if she got her hands on Hunter's staff? I partly wonder if Luz would figure out how to make a device that can disrupt Belos's staff like a magical Emp device or something like that as well as also figuring out a more effective way of taking down the Abomiton's with minimal magic so her and the Hexsqaud can make even quicker work of them.
Yeah, that all works. When I said Luz having a panic attack at meeting a Dalek, I mean like, she is meeting the creatures in her nightmares, the creatures who killed both her father and her people, she would absolutely freak out. Of course she would get over the fear and confront the Daleks, but she wouldn’t be alone in doing that.
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202307:09PM UTC
No she wouldn't in fact I think Luz would probably ask The Doctor on how he overcame his fear of the Daleks the 9th's reaction to seeing a Dalek vs. When the 10th Doctor sees one definitely shows that him getting over it was recent. Personally I think part of him getting over his fear of Daleks was because he saw first hand the lengths that Rose was willing to go through to stop them and to save him and seeing how a human could something like that gave him the resolve he needed.
True, very true, but, when should Luz have her first encounter with a Dalek? I’m starting the events of Doctor Who with the 9th Doctor and Rose, should Luz and Camila also be with them in the episode “Dalek”?
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202307:34PM UTC
That's another good question it would certainly be interesting though personally I was thinking about the 10th Doctor's encounter at the end of season 2 but that's also hard to work out given how fast paced the episode is not to mention The Doctor losing Rose would make him kinda hard to get advice from.
Yeah given the choice I'd say Dalek would be a better choice in fact you could have Luz actually be there backing up Rose when she's questioning what The Doctor is becoming do to Luz having a fear of Daleks but her compassion and empathy for the poor creature outweighing and allowing her to overpower her fear. Meanwhile Camila is in an incredibly conflicted place given like The Doctor she would still hold tremendous anger, rage and hatred towards the Daleks but would want to still set a good example for Luz.
Yeah, that works, how would Rose and the Doctor meet up with Luz and the Nurse? Would the Doctor’s TARDIS sense the presence of another TARDIS along with two other Time Lords and then home in on their location?
Windwolf9 (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Fri 24
Mar 202307:50PM UTC
I don't think so as shown in by the 11th Doctor when he was investigating a mystery that interfered with the Tardis being able to land properly and it ended up being a lost Tardis trying to find a pilot and the 11th Doctor wasn't able to make the connection. I think it would make more sense for the Tardis to lock on to the energy signatures of 2 reawakened Time lord/lady's plus wouldn't the Tardis had detected Camila's Tardis earlier than?
Also I think Amity tagging along with Luz would both help Luz out moral support wise in moments like in Dalek and it would carry on the pastime of traveling Time lord/lady's taking companions along with them.
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