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  1. FuelMyDelusions on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Nov 2023 04:54AM UTC

    EEE thank you!! I was hoping I got her voice right, have read the books so many times so I feel I have absorbed her enough. Jake too I’m excited to do some Jake POV 👀 and yes, the Cullens are going to be amped up a bit more negatively and to be shown as manipulative. Honestly when I was skimming through the real BD to write this, this is the tone of Alice I got and I just ran with it. Im so happy you liked it and your comment motivated me to get back to writing! Hoping Ch 2 will be up sometime in the next few days.

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    1. AgaveBadger on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Nov 2023 05:15AM UTC

      I would be so FREAKING excited to see some of the story from Jake's perspective
      Bella and Jake's interactions so far have been insanely cute and feel accurate to their banter from New Moon.
      I'll keep an eye out for an update (-;

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