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1. OneArtsyGamer03 on Chapter 7 Sat 24 May 2025 10:16AM UTC

   

   OHHH YES OMG— I PUT “FRONT” TWICE PLS😭😭 Thank you so much for pointing that out— I really appreciate it!! I fixed it— sometimes I write when it’s like 4 am and I space out in between sentences so I always forget I already detailed something 😭 like I legit put “she put the bowl of water down, smiling lightly and putting the bowl of water down.” at some point cause I just don’t notice so I truly appreciate you telling me!!

   No worries on the correction— I genuinely appreciate it! I’d love if you pointed out stuff like that in my future chapters as well, it’d really help me when I don’t catch them!

   IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THE CHAPTER LOVELY ILY 😭❤️ I’m really grateful for your support and kind comments!! :D Next chapter will hopefully be done in a week or two!!

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2. 1. Dumb4ss_okami_fan on Chapter 7 Sat 24 May 2025 10:50AM UTC

      

      I’d be more than happy to help!!!

      I totally get what you mean about the repeating stuff in sentences XD I do it in my own writing when I should definitely be getting sleep instead of being hunched over my laptop!!

      And deadass if you ever want a beta reader hit me up!! <3

      Last Edited Sat 24 May 2025 10:53AM UTC

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   2. 1. OneArtsyGamer03 on Chapter 7 Thu 12 Jun 2025 11:11PM UTC

         

         I DIDNT SEE THIS IM SORRY OR NOT REPLYING SOONER— I definitely will let you know if I ever want one for sure!!! :D I’ll think about it!! ❤️❤️

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      2. 1. Dumb4ss_okami_fan on Chapter 7 Thu 12 Jun 2025 11:35PM UTC

            

            Omg literally don’t even worry about it!!! Ilysm!!! <3 <3 ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡ <3 <3

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