Comment on The Light You Still Hold

  1. YOURE SO SWEET THANK YOU! It's okay, I understand needing time to set your brain up for something new! It's why I had Something's Gotta Give open in a tab on my phone for about two weeks before I finally made the plunge to read it. I'm really excited to hear your thoughts along the way.

    I'm so glad the repetition of that line hit as it was intended! I really debated whether I would keep it, but I really love the way some thoughts become so strong that they sort of override everything else. I initially only had it come up once or twice, but it just fit so well! I really wanted to nail that Ophelia was leaving out of an understandable fear. Something I didn't think we got to experience for long in the game because obvs it needed us to be a future inquisitor. She's a bit of a coward, but not the type of person to leave people hanging if she can avoid it. 🥹

    Seconded that smash. 😆😆😆

    Thank you for your comment!! 😊 More Cullen very soon for you!

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    1. lol I think I’ve had you’re fic open for about two weeks too 😆 I would already die for Ophelia, we can be cowards (who can’t not help despite being afraid) together 🥰

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