killing your darlings can be so hard, I sympathize immensely. “would he say that?” is also such a pain. Adolin was more emotional here than we see him be on-page, but it also feels in-character still—like he’s probably had breakdowns over stuff before and we just don’t get to see it in canon because it doesn’t advance the plot, but he’s definitely still having them. Adolin is an emotional guy, and he’s not really a fan of trying to hide that.
<3 I’m glad to have made your week! The fic was excellent, and deserves a good review
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Silvermoonwater on Chapter 2 Fri 06 Jun 2025 08:17PM UTC
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